Under the Clockface

Author:Yara Montrel
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About the Story

On the centennial morning, clockmaker Eli Navarro faces a final, public test when the town clock falters. Armed with craft, stubbornness, and a reluctant apprentice, he chooses a risky, hands-on repair under the tower’s roof in front of the town. The chapter follows the tense, physical work of reshaping metal, the everyday humor and rituals of a small community, and the immediate aftermath as Eli’s skill restores both mechanism and connection.

Chapters

1.Saturday at the Workshop1–9
2.Among the Gears10–17
3.Chiming18–25
craft
community
clockmaking
intergenerational
small-town
repair
slice of life
hands-on

Story Insight

Under the Clockface centers on Eli Navarro, a precise and solitary clockmaker whose small workshop sits beneath the town’s aging public clock. When that clock falters on the cusp of the town’s centennial, Eli faces a practical dilemma that quickly becomes personal: whether to keep the boundaries of his quiet craft or step into a messy, communal problem that requires both skill and company. The novel sets its scene in tactile detail—the smell of coffee and brass, the lathe’s steady whir, market stalls selling gear-shaped buns, and a Route Seven cart that jingles a wooden bell—so the setting reads like a lived-in toolbench. Minor characters—Clara, the pragmatic community organizer; Tomas, a curious teenage apprentice; and Mrs. Henson, a blunt and warm neighbor—populate the town with small rituals and wry asides, giving the everyday life an approachable humor and warmth without undercutting the stakes. The story is anchored by craft: precise, embodied work is both plot engine and metaphor. Technical obstacles—the main wheel’s worn teeth, a delaminated hub that needs a press-fit sleeve, an escapement pallet that must be re-profiled—are described with enough specificity to feel authentic while remaining accessible to non-specialists. That grounded detail supports deeper themes: repair as a moral act, how a profession shapes identity, and the quiet labor by which communities hold themselves together. Eli’s internal conflict is pragmatic and emotional at once; he is not dragged into a melodrama but must weigh the known comforts of solitude against a riskier openness. The narrative also explores teaching as part of repair, showing how tacit knowledge—what machinists call the feel of a true runout or the tone a file makes—must be translated into words and gestures to bring another person into a craft. Small, human moments (a pigeon perching in the tower, a stalled power outage that turns late-night work into candlelit collaboration, and the town’s culinary quirks) punctuate the technical work and keep the tone warm, slightly comic, and very humane. Structurally compact and deliberately paced across three chapters, the book moves from routine and refusal into escalating mechanical and social stakes, reaching a tense, hands-on sequence under the tower’s roof where choices must be made and skill applied in real time. The climax depends on practical expertise—filing, burnishing, fitting a sleeve, and calibrating a pendulum under live load—rather than revelation or grand gestures. That makes the resolution feel earned, and it reframes community care as an accumulation of careful, competent acts. For readers who appreciate slice-of-life fiction steeped in craft, who like their drama quiet and tactile rather than spectacular, and who enjoy writing that combines credible technical detail with small-town atmosphere and gentle humor, this story offers a grounded, humane portrait of work, risk, and the soft business of belonging.

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Chapter One

Saturday at the Workshop

The shop smelled like burned coffee and brass. Morning light cut through the grimy skylight in a thin diagonal and caught on a dozen tiny teeth, a constellation of sprockets and pinions tagged and hung on the pegboard like medals. Eli Navarro moved through them with the certainty of someone who had taught himself every angle of his own shadow. He put a loupe to his eye, braced a handheld escapement in the bench vise, and listened as if his ears were another set of calipers. The tiny tooth he was filing needed one millimeter of relief; he could tell that by the way the filing rasp grieved against the metal and then sang smooth. He twisted, filed, and breathed oil-scented air into the afternoon, his hands making orders the rest of his life had accepted without complaint.

Outside, the town was doing its Saturday: the market stalls unfurled red-and-white awnings, the baker two doors down sent out warm parcels of cinnamon flatbreads that people called clock buns because they were shaped like small gears, and the weather had that soft, sea-burnished quality that made even slow things feel deliberate. Children ran past with paper kites for a weekend festival that had nothing to do with bells or hours, and a delivery cart jingled a wooden bell twice at the corner — Route Seven’s odd salutary rattle, a custom that started when the route first ran through town and nobody could agree on a proper horn.

Eli hunched over his bench and worked the file with wrist muscles wired to memory. He tamped a tiny bubble of solder into a fractured tooth and watched it pool and draw like a small, obedient moon. Tomas Alvarez hovered at the doorway, all eagerness and scuffed sneakers, a pair of brass goggles jammed on his forehead like a crooked crown.

"That's not how my uncle did it," Tomas piped, eyes scanning every tool as if each had a biography to be read. "He used a grinder and then sang to the teeth."

Eli glanced up without looking up. "Your uncle sang to his teeth. Lucky bastard. Don't try that on my pieces. Songs have been known to warp brass."

Tomas grinned. "Worth the risk."

Mrs. Henson's footsteps were softer than the kettle's hiss when she arrived with a thermos of lentil soup and a pocketful of opinion. She had an unofficial municipal license to complain and a walnut tray of admonishments on standby, which she set down beside Eli's oil-stained rag.

"You finally remembered to open by proper light, Eli? Or are you courting shadow hours now?" she asked, peering at the bench.

"The skylight does most of the courting, Mrs. Henson. I supply the coffee." He lifted the soldering iron like a small, durable baton. "What's the gossip?"

She sat on a stool and placed the thermos between two spool ends. "Centennial's in three weeks. Clara wants the town clock checked. She says the mayor's giving a speech and everyone expects it to chime on the dot. You should do it, dear. It would be a shame otherwise."

The word sat in the air like a misplaced screw. Eli felt it, the way a machinist feels a burr under a file: irritating, and not necessarily catastrophic. He had lived under the town clock long enough to know its moods; for reasons he preferred not to rehearse, he liked the clock to be a creature of its own dignity rather than a public performance. He let the solder cool, clamped the piece, and wiped his palms on his apron as if preparing for a meditation.

"Clara can ask," he said. "And she can ask again. But I keep my shop work separate from municipal ceremonies. People like their pomp; I like my quiet."

Mrs. Henson made a sound that was a cross between a chuckle and a small, practical grumble. "Don't be coy. You like having something that keeps track of you. Admit it."

He gave her a look that said he liked a good clock the way a cat likes a windowsill: useful, predictable, unremarkable. Tomas, meanwhile, was already meddling with a screwdriver and a pocket-sized alarm clock he'd found at a stall, trying to prove he could crack its back without breaking its dignity.

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Frequently Asked Questions about Under the Clockface

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What is Under the Clockface about and who is the central character ?

Under the Clockface follows Eli Navarro, a solitary clockmaker whose town clock falters before the centennial. The plot centers on his practical decision to repair the mechanism, the hands-on work involved, and how that choice draws him into community life.

The narrative treats craft as identity, showing repair as both technical work and moral labor. Themes include intergenerational knowledge transfer, the quiet value of reliable service, and how small acts of care sustain a community.

Mechanical steps—lathe turning, filing gear teeth, press-fitting a sleeve, re-profiling an escapement—are described with authentic detail, but presented through action and sensation so non-specialists can follow without prior expertise.

Key figures include Clara, the pragmatic organizer; Tomas, an eager teenage apprentice; and Mrs. Henson, a warm neighbor. Their moods and requests create social pressure and practical help that push Eli from private routine into collaborative repair.

Yes—the climax hinges on practical skill. Eli must fabricate or refit parts, adjust the escapement, and calibrate the pendulum under live load. The decisive moment is a hands-on intervention using his craftsmanship.

The story appeals to readers who enjoy intimate, tactile fiction: low-key tension, humane humor, small-town texture, and detailed depictions of skilled work rather than large-scale conflict or melodrama.

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Claire Robbins
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Jan 11, 2026

Beautiful, tactile prose — but the story feels like a well-polished postcard rather than anything surprising. The scene in the shop (burned coffee, brass, the loupe and that precise millimeter of filing) is lovely and very sensory, yet the arc around the centennial public repair lands exactly where you expect it to. Eli’s decision to climb the tower for a hands-on fix is presented as inevitable rather than earned: why is this the one moment he must perform publicly? The stakes never get sharpened beyond “people are watching,” and that makes the climax oddly flat. Tomas is fun as the eager apprentice, but he’s sketched in broad strokes — scuffed sneakers, crooked goggles, uncle who sang to teeth — and reads like a trope rather than a person. Small-town details (clock buns, Route Seven’s rattling bell) are cute, but the town’s rituals are mostly window dressing rather than drivers of tension. I also wondered about practical logistics: if Eli’s shop has been keeping the clock for years, why does the town expect a dramatic rooftop fix now? It feels like the story leans on ceremony instead of tightening motive and consequence. Fixes? Trim some of the leisurely description or spread it more evenly so the emotional payoff has room to breathe; deepen Tomas and Eli’s history so that the public repair truly changes something. As is, it’s pleasant to read but disappointingly predictable 🤨