The Weaver of Echoes

The Weaver of Echoes

Yara Montrel
46
6.58(59)

About the Story

When the Chordstone that binds the sky-city of Aerlance begins to fray, apprentice sound-weaver Eloin must follow a vanished low note into factories and ledgers. With a borrowed violin and a clever companion she uncovers a trade in silenced songs and learns to mend a city by teaching people how to listen.

Chapters

1.Lanterns and Threads1–4
2.Along the Thin Road5–7
3.The Donor's Violin8–9
4.The Quiet Marshal10–12
5.Stitching the City13–14
fantasy
music
adventure
18-25 age
coming-of-age
sound-magic
social-justice
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Ratings

6.58
59 ratings
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13.6%(8)
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13.6%(8)
8
16.9%(10)
7
8.5%(5)
6
6.8%(4)
5
16.9%(10)
4
11.9%(7)
3
8.5%(5)
2
3.4%(2)
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Reviews
9

67% positive
33% negative
Zoe Turner
Negative
3 weeks ago

Cute idea, pretty lines, but ultimately a bit safe. I liked the playful details — the knot-as-heartbeat apron-tying, the color-braided hearing — but the stakes never felt truly high. The silenced-songs trade has ominous hints but the narrative handles it a little too gently; a darker, riskier confrontation would have focused the story. Also, the ending's emphasis on communal listening was sweet but borderline saccharine. Decent read if you're after cozy, musical fantasy, but don't expect hard-hitting drama.

Robert Phillips
Negative
3 weeks ago

An intriguing concept hampered by uneven pacing and some underwritten characters. Eloin is sympathetic and the imagery (lamps humming in layered chords, jars of tuning dust) is the book's strongest asset, but secondary figures like Master Cail and the 'clever companion' never feel fully inhabitable; they're more archetype than people. The reveal of the trade in silenced songs is morally interesting but narratively thin — I wanted more on how that market operated, who profited, and the socio-economic forces keeping it afloat. A few plot holes bothered me: why does the city's maintenance depend on a chord that can fray so casually? Also, the resolution leans toward neatness: teaching people to listen is a lovely idea, but felt like a pat solution to structural problems that required institutional change. Worth reading for the atmosphere, but it could have been stronger.

Laura Kim
Negative
3 weeks ago

I wanted to love this more than I did. The premise is immediately appealing — a fraying Chordstone, songs trafficked as contraband — and the opening descriptions are lovely, but the middle of the book drags. After the evocative 'missing note' hook, the investigation stalls with repeated scenes of Eloin patching small things that felt like filler rather than plot progression. The social-justice angle is promising, but the book tends to tell rather than show how the trade harms people; the factories and ledgers sequence hints at systemic corruption but doesn't follow through with enough detail on who benefits and why. I also found some conveniences awkward: too many doors unlocked at just the right time, a couple of late reveals that read like authorial shortcuts. Still, the sensory writing and a handful of emotional moments — the listening workshop, the violin's solo — were worth it. This one needed a tighter edit.

Emma Carter
Recommended
3 weeks ago

I finished this with my chest tight and my hands still remembering the feeling of braided sound. The opening paragraph — the city of Aerlance humming with lamps that form chords — is one of the most vivid worldbuilding beats I've read lately. Eloin's apprenticeship is tender and tactile: I could practically smell the varnish on her bench and see the jars of labeled dust. The moment the bells of the Lower Spire tumble out of time and that note goes missing gave me actual goosebumps. I loved the borrowed violin scene; it's simple and earnest and becomes a kind of language between Eloin and the city. The social-justice thread — silenced songs being trafficked — never feels preachy, it grounds the adventure and gives Eloin a real moral weight. The companion is clever without stealing the show, and Master Cail's neatness about sound is such a nice, human detail. This is a coming-of-age that listens as much as it speaks. Highly recommended for anyone who loves music-driven fantasy.

Marcus Reed
Recommended
3 weeks ago

This is an elegant, restrained fantasy that trusts its quieter moments. The scene where children practice lullabies as balance exercises is such a precise worldbuilding detail — it tells you what society values without an infodump. Eloin is an apprentice in the most classical sense: hands-on, earnest, learning by doing. The prose rarely overreaches; when the chord flickers and a note vanishes from the western string, the writing tightens and the mystery propels the narrative. I also liked that the resolution isn't just a magical fix: mending Aerlance comes through communal change and listening, not a deus ex machina. A subtle, thoughtful read for readers who prefer nuance over spectacle.

Joshua Bennett
Recommended
4 weeks ago

I went in expecting a run-of-the-mill apprentice-hero tale and came out pleasantly annoyed at myself for underestimating it. The concept of a city literally held together by music is the kind of whimsical engineering I live for, and the prose sells it without ever sounding precious. The scenes in the ledgers-and-factory quarter have a nice grime-and-treasure vibe — like if Dickens played a violin — and the antagonist trade in silenced songs feels genuinely creepy. Also, Eloin's synesthesia is never used just to show off; it carries emotional weight. So yeah, I'm sold. I might be humming the lamps' cadence all week. 😉

Daniel Hughes
Recommended
4 weeks ago

The Weaver of Echoes impressed me with its rigorous internal logic and sensory prose. The Chordstone as a structural and cultural device is brilliant: sound-as-infrastructure explains so many small, believable customs — lullaby balance exercises, sailors timing knots to cadences — that make Aerlance feel lived-in. Eloin's synesthetic hearing (notes braided with color) is used cleverly throughout; it's not just a neat gimmick but a way the narrative conveys stakes (the western string flicker, the missing note). The investigation into factories and ledgers cleverly flips the fantasy detective model: reading financial ledgers becomes as tense as sneaking into a warehouse of silenced songs. I appreciated the ethical center — teaching people to listen rather than solely fixing a magical artifact — which makes the ending feel earned. The one place I wanted more was the political landscape: some of the trade's origins and the institutions profiting from it could have been pumped up to heighten the climax. Still, layered worldbuilding, strong protagonist arc, and evocative prose make this a standout.

Hannah O'Neill
Recommended
4 weeks ago

I found The Weaver of Echoes unexpectedly moving. On the surface it's an adventure — apprentice, vanished note, factories and ledgers — but it's really about apprenticeship in empathy. Eloin's growth is shown through small acts: coaxing a melancholy thread back into a bow, teaching two lanterns to stop arguing over a harmonic. Those domestic, repair-shop moments are the heart of the book and contrast beautifully with the darker discovery of silenced songs being sold. The violin borrowed early on becomes more than a tool; it's a means of translation between people who have stopped hearing each other. I teared up during the sequence where Eloin holds a listening workshop in a marketplace and strangers begin to recognize the chords that once steadied their balconies — the idea that structural safety and emotional safety are intertwined is handled so well. If you like stories that are both imaginative and humane, this will stick with you.

Aisha Patel
Recommended
4 weeks ago

Short and sweet: I adored it. Eloin's ability to 'hear' color, the smell of varnish on her hands, Master Cail's copper-wrapped braid — little touches like those made the whole thing sing. The missing note at the Lower Spire was a chilling hook and the idea of songs being silenced and traded? So poetic and sinister at once. Also, the bit where she teaches people to listen? Legit tear-jerker. ❤️