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The Spark Key of Sundown Ridge

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In the dusty town of Sundown Ridge, Mara Quinn keeps the telegraph and the depot running. When the town's rails are cut and a land baron moves to seize the water and the deeds, Mara gathers unlikely allies, a spark key, and a stubborn heart to save her home.

Western
Adventure
Coming-of-age
Frontier
18-25 age
26-35 age

Dawn over the Iron Tracks

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Dawn cut the plain with the narrow blade of a new sun and Mara Quinn already had coal dust under her fingernails. The depot stove breathed hot and steady in the small room behind the ticket counter, and the telegraph sounder on its oak stand made the only honest music she trusted: a patient clack that stitched the town to the rest of the line. Sundown Ridge was a smear of boardwalks and dirt, the post office, the saloon where men bled wagers into the floor, and the stretch of rails that ran like a bright promise to the horizon. Mara moved between them with hands made for turning keys and splicing wire, fingers that remembered the right twist and how a knot held under strain.

She checked the gauge on the signal lamp, tasted the metal tang of oil on her tongue, and wrapped a leather strap over the new coil she’d wound the night before. The train would come at nine; it always came, and when it did the town breathed deeper. Old Mac, the telegraphman who had taught her how to read the world in dots and dashes, sat with his shoulders like a map of every season’s rain. His eyes were pale as chipped china but bright with the kind of attention that could tell a lie from a cough.

"You ought to let the hardware settle, Mar," he said without looking up, laying a faded index on the desk. "Coils bridle if you hurry them."

"And you ought to eat something warm, Mac." She set a pot on the small burner, the steam smelling of bread and lard. For all his lectures, Mac chewed only on the edges of stale bread and the days were long and thin for him. "Gus'll be here with the mail."

Gus, the engine's driver, came in with soot on his forearms and a grin that had room for all Sundown Ridge's half-sad jokes. He slapped Mara’s shoulder and left a smear of grease on her sleeve. A child, Tommy, trailed behind him, his nose raw from the cold and his eyes huge with the way boys see the world as if it were full of horses. "Morning, Miss Quinn. Engine's making good time. We'll be on schedule."

That certainty was part of the town's backbone. People measured their lives by the rhythm of the iron horse: the merchant who relied on a crate, the doctor who timed a delivery, the widow who awaited her monthly letter. Mara liked the rhythm because it answered questions she kept asking herself about where the next thing would come from. She hadn't been born with a badge or a gun; she had been born with a crooked wrist and a steadier patience than most. In the depot she was a gear in a machine that evened out the chaos.

She had not meant to be more than that, but when Old Mac squinted at the pile of telegram drafts and nodded toward the telegraph key, she felt the old pull of wanting to make something stand true. Outside, the wind pressed dust into the wooden eaves. A man in a duster tipped his hat as he passed; the horses stamped, the day breathed its warm, honest breath. The bell at the stationhouse chimed nine and Gus’s shadow crossed the platform, long as an accusation.

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