Tetherfall

Tetherfall

Author:Liora Fennet
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5.82(57)

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About the Story

In a flooded neon city tethered to an ancient orbital Spine, salvage-runner Cass Calder finds a stolen shard of the Spire. Hunted by corporate enforcer Marla Voss, Cass must gather a ragged crew, learn to wield a strange device, and protect a secret that could remake the city. An action-driven tale of risk, loyalty, and hard choices.

Chapters

1.Neon Harbor1–4
2.Crossing the Spines5–7
3.The Spine8–10
4.Return to the Docks11–13
Action
Sci-Fi
18-25 лет
Urban Adventure
Action

Faultline Run

A burned identity, a halted network, and a city waiting for the consequences. Cole Vance triggers a hardware shutdown on a corporate-controlled platform to stop a synchronized activation that would seize urban infrastructure. The act saves lives but destroys the cryptographic proof that could clear his name; regulators and leaks press Aegis into scrutiny even as personal cost forces him off the map.

Mariel Santhor
1472 303
Action

Pulse of the City

When a live node goes missing and an engineer disappears, a former operative drags old debts into a conspiracy that weaponizes the city's infrastructure. She must race networks and men to rescue her brother and stop a manufactured crisis before a reserve node tears the city open.

Leonard Sufran
193 70
Action

Skyline Tides

In a storm-lashed coastal metropolis, rooftop runner Mai races to deliver an AI patch to the city’s seized desalination plant. With gecko gloves, an amphibious drone, and help from a silver-haired radio tinkerer, she threads canals and catwalks to outmaneuver mercenaries in a high-stakes sprint for water.

Mariette Duval
174 28
Action

Steelwake Protocol

A high-octane urban thriller set in a drowned megacity where a salvage diver, a hacker, and a patchwork crew steal back a life-saving regulator from corporate hands. They expose a secret ledger that privatizes air, triggering public fury, legal battles, and a fragile civic victory.

Elias Krovic
232 41
Action

Redline Protocol

In a near-future city, a framed former special-ops leader, Cass Hale, is drawn back into conflict when a stolen fragment of a covert activation protocol — the Redline — is used to fabricate an assassination and seed a corporate authorization system with his biometric signature. He and a ragged team of allies race against time to rescue the hacker who stole the fragment, expose the networked weapon, and stop a private company's public test. The final chapter detonates with a simultaneous breach and a dangerous neural sync that forces the protocol to fail; leaked logs ignite public scrutiny, Helion's CEO is captured, and the team must reckon with the lingering pieces of a technology that refuses to die.

Ophelia Varn
754 58
Action

Razor Line

Former courier Elias Kade wakes framed for violent theft after a midnight drop goes wrong. Chased through rail yards, corporate vaults, and a city wired for control, he races to expose a private security magnate’s plot to weaponize infrastructure while protecting his sister and choosing how to pay the cost.

Leonhard Stramm
1219 250

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Ratings

5.82
57 ratings
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14%(8)
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60% positive
40% negative
Olivia Brooks
Negative
Oct 6, 2025

I kept waiting for Tetherfall to surprise me and it mostly didn't. The prose can be gorgeous — that opening line about rain on hot metal is great — but too often the plot moves from A to B on rails. Cass is clearly meant to be a compelling lead, but aside from her rig-riding swagger and a few sharp lines she feels underexplored, and the fledgling crew reads like checklist character types. Marla Voss is threatening, sure, but also a little one-note: visor, long coat, calm voice with teeth. The shard/device concept is promising but left me with questions about why it matters so much beyond being 'the thing everyone wants.' Also: a couple of convenient escapes (winch saves, perfect timing of skiff malfunctions) felt like authorial hand-holding. If you're craving neon action and don't need deep surprises, you'll enjoy the set pieces. For me, it needed more risk and fewer genre autopilot moves.

James Harlow
Negative
Oct 4, 2025

I wanted to like Tetherfall more than I did. The opening is strong — the imagery of the harbor and the salvage run is vivid, and that moment with the stranded drone and the shard is genuinely gripping. But as the story moves forward, a lot of familiar beats take over: corporate villainy as shorthand evil, a 'ragged crew' that feels assembled to hit genre beats rather than to be lived-in people, and a MacGuffin (the shard) whose rules aren't always clear. Pacing is uneven; action sequences are exciting, but long stretches of exposition and internal monologue sap momentum. The author leans heavily on noir-flavored tropes — rain-slick streets, visor-clad enforcers, the lone salvage runner with a heart — which is fine when subverted, but here many of those elements hit predictably. Also, some tech explanations wobble between too-brief and overcomplicated: the device that 'tastes wrong' is intriguing but not fully earned by the time the chapter ends. If you want a fast, stylish action romp and don't mind familiar sci-fi scaffolding, it'll work. If you're after something more subversive or character-forward, it falls short.

Maya Thompson
Recommended
Oct 3, 2025

Okay, first: that drone's little AI voice saying 'Please. Keep. Safe.' hit me like a punch in the gut and also made me laugh because of how tender it was in such a brutal place. Cass is cool and messy in all the right ways — surfboarding on a rig, prying barnacled crates, snatching things that will probably get her killed. Marla Voss = corporate menace, 10/10. I loved the sensory stuff (neon bleeding down barges, salt and copper tang) and the tiny details (winch, sparks, the skiff cutting fog) that make the world feel lived-in. The only gripe: I wanted more time with the crew — they show promise but feel a smidge shorthand. Still, sharp dialogue, solid action, and a world that wants to be explored. I'm all in for a sequel. Bring on more Spine mysteries, please 😉

David Nguyen
Recommended
Sep 30, 2025

Tetherfall is tight, propulsive sci-fi. The opening sequence — dropping into the cargo maw, the cracked drone, the shard that fits like a heartbeat — sets up stakes and tone in under a page, which I appreciated. Cass's skillset (rig, harness, winch) and the city's physicality (stacked barges, neon, the tethered Spine) are conveyed with economical detail that never feels like info-dump. Marla Voss reads as a classic corporate enforcer, but her confrontation on the skiff is effective: the visored silhouette, the motorthrum, the calm voice with teeth. I also liked that the shard/device isn't just a magic box; it comes with consequences and choices. Pacing is mostly strong — action-driven, as promised — though a couple of expositional chapters slow momentum. Still, for fans of urban sci-fi and heist-adventure combos, this is a solid, well-crafted ride.

Emily Carter
Recommended
Oct 5, 2025

Tetherfall hooked me from that very first paragraph — the harbor description felt like standing on the deck with Cass: salt, diesel, neon bleeding into rain. The opening salvage scene (Cass prying open the barnacled crate, the drone's keening) was cinematic and tense. I loved how the tiny drone's 'Please. Keep. Safe.' lands like a moral seed that ripples through the rest of the book. Cass is a believable, hard-edged protagonist; the way she rides her rig, the harness singing against her ribs, made her tangible. Marla Voss is an effectively cold threat — the calm with teeth line still gives me chills — and the ragtag crew you meet later adds real warmth and stakes to the action. The Spire shard and the strange device felt mysterious without being hand-waved away, and the city itself is almost a character: neon, water, and that Spine pulsing through the smog. A few scenes could've used a bit more breathing room, but overall this is an action-packed, emotional read about loyalty and hard choices. Highly recommend for anyone who likes gritty sci-fi and fast pacing.