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Echoes of the Atlas Veil

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A young courier and art student dives into a full-immersion game to recover fragments of his sister's lost consciousness. In a neon city where memories are traded, he must pass trials, win a donor's trust, face a code Warden and a rival player, and decide what to keep between virtual profits and human life.

LitRPG
virtual reality
cyberpunk
adventure
18-25 age
memory
ethical AI

Rain, Credits, and a Little Sister

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The cargo bike's tires hissed on the slick ribbon of elevated roadway like a tired animal forcing itself forward. Niko leaned into the handlebars and felt the city press in from all sides: glass terraces blinking with office ghosts, neon tapes that promised faster credits and calmer dreams, and the soft mechanical sigh of delivery drones carving their lanes through the low clouds. Palomar smelled of ozone, burnt sugar from street bakeries and something metallic that tasted like coin in the mouth. He had a worn canvas satchel, a thermal parcel strapped to his back, and a small square of paper fastened inside his jacket—a photograph of a girl who smiled like weather.

His wrist HUD chimed: DELAYED ROUTE +0.05c. He ignored it. The route feed flickered up in a translucent strip—ETA twelve minutes, traffic: heavy. Below the route strip a pinned alert glowed: LYRA—STABLE (ICU). Niko's thumb left a print on the glass as if he could press her heartbeat into the world and hold it there.

“Garr says you’re late again,” his dispatcher said through the bone-conduct speaker, casual as rain. Rita's voice had the clipped efficiency of someone who had memorized city routes before she learned names.

“Running on fumes,” Niko replied. He could hear how cheap his voice sounded inside the comm: stretch of someone renting air and time.

He rode past a holo-billboard for Atlas Veil—a game that filled entire neighborhoods with alternate alleys and slow gold. The ad loop promised steady pay for beta testers, and in the corner a smiling face pulsed with the tagline: EARN REAL—SAVE A LIFE (CONDITIONS APPLY). Niko laughed, a quick thing, and then it left him feeling foolish. Garr wanted packages on time, the landlord wanted his portion of the week, and Lyra's monitors swallowed the nights. The photograph in his pocket smelled faintly of smoke and paint. Lyra had cut her hair short last winter; the last time he saw her laugh it made the dim hospital ward feel like a stage.

He delivered the parcel into a mid-level terrace with the practiced gentleness of someone who moves fragile things for a living. A woman with a braided tattoo took it and pressed a coin into his palm with a thumb that smelled of citrus and acetone. She said, “Nice art on your jacket. Show me sometime.” He nodded, and as he mounted the bike again he replayed Lyra’s voice in his head—her clipped, stubborn insistence that he promise to finish art school. He promised her he would a hundred times in the last two months, like a child promising stars.

Traffic folded him into a canyon of mirrors and ads. A drone buzzed low enough to make his scalp prickle. He zipped through a gap and the city opened into his block: concrete terraces stacked like pages. His building was one of those narrow, hopeful constructions where the cheap is always half a promise away from being good enough. He kicked the bike, pushed it under the stairwell awning, and tasted coffee and dust as he climbed.

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