Stitchwork of the Neon Veil

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A presence tailor in a neon city threads deliberate imperfections into social tech to make room for real connection. After a risky live intervention at a festival, she contends with audits, imitators, and moral pressure while teaching neighbors to choose awkwardness over polish.

Juno Sable earns a living by sewing other people’s faces together. As a presence tailor in a neon-stitched city, she builds and repairs persona overlays—tactile, hybrid devices that smooth the awkward edges of social life. Her work blends low-tech craft and sharp code: copper coils and needle-antennas meet micro-looms and behavior matrices, and every seam carries a tiny artisan watermark. When a lucrative commission arrives asking for a companion overlay with a “Reciprocity Lock” (an option that eradicates mutual surprise), Juno accepts to keep her shop afloat—but she leaves a microscopic imperfection: a deliberate “rough hem” meant to preserve small, consented frictions. Quiet compromises ripple outward, and a theft, a copied prototype, and a young apprentice’s zeal push what was meant as a private intervention into public currents. The story pivots on a decisive, hands-on act—an improvised live intervention that draws directly on Juno’s craft skills—rather than a single exposé or philosophical epiphany. The book treats technology as social architecture rather than mere gadgetry. It examines how design choices shape intimacy, bargaining with the tension between comfort sold as a commodity and awkwardness that invites real exchange. Rather than casting a faceless corporation as the sole antagonist, the plot keeps the conflict local and social: payment pressures, market demand for predictable companionship, generational debates about scale and ethics, and neighbors who make ordinary life feel like protest. The cast is small but vivid—Arik, a weathered mentor who keeps the shop’s doors open; Tahlia, an unaugmented musician whose blunt humor punctures solemnity; Kian, a young, idealistic coder who wants to scale intimacy quickly; and Mr. Snips, a repair droid with a flair for knitting coin-scarves. World details—street vendors selling fermented starfruit and kelp buns, jury-rigged maintenance gantries, rooftop gardens, and a marketplace that still trades hand-made goods—anchor the high-tech dilemmas in familiar human textures. This story’s strengths lie in its tactile specificity and moral precision. Technical scenes are written with attention to believable tools and practices: the tactile compositor that forces a human handshake, the analog fallback that prevents a wholesale overwrite, and the hand-soldered splices that render code legible as craft. Humor appears in small, human moments—an absurd little crown of rivets for a shop droid, a musician who asks for a “hiccup” in the amp—and lightens moral complexity without undercutting it. The emotional arc moves from guarded loneliness toward a fragile, communal connection; choices have real costs and mundane rewards. Stylistically, the prose stays grounded: it favors close, sensory description and pragmatic problem-solving over grand ideological pronouncements. Readers who appreciate intimate, craft-centered cyberpunk will find the novel rewarding. It balances procedure and feeling, delivering plausible technical action scenes alongside neighborhood intimacy and wry, humane humor. The narrative wrestles with consent, the ethics of design, and the work of teaching people to live with—rather than erase—awkwardness. The result is a thoughtful, hands-on exploration of how small, skillful interventions can change the texture of daily life in a high-tech city, told through the particular lens of a maker who prefers tools and stubborn friendships to slogans and manifestos.

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